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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I argue that whether young people should be independent from their parents or not relies on the actual situations they are in.
When one is still incapable of an independent living, it is highly suggested that he live together with his parents. To make an independent living is no easy thing. Consider all the things required for a normal independent life. One first of all needs a place which he calls a “home”。To own a home, he either needs to buy an apartmlent in any form of payment or to rent one from others which also needs money. To house himself, to feed himself, and to clothe himself are the three basic needs that he will have to meet first. And in a country where employment itself is a big problem, having enough money to do all these is simply unimaginable. Then, there are other not-too-much materialistic things that he will have to take into consideration, such as the care and love of his parents that he has been so used to, the companionship of his family members that will all suddenly disappear from around him, and so on and so forth. So, when a young adult decides to live independently, he should first ask himself: Are you ready for it?
If the answer is “Yes, absolutely,”then he is suggested to do so right away. Living independently from one's parents definitely possesses many an advantage. First, it shows that he is a grown-up now, no longer needing to depend on his parents for a living. Second, by doing so, he “emancipates” his parents-finally giving them the time or chance to live or enjoy their own lives after having spent so many years of time bringing up and caring for their children. Third, it gives young adults the opportunities to learn from their own life experiences so that they will mature more quickly and thus become truly grown-ups. Fourth, young people need the freedom brought about by living independently. On the one hand, they would not give their parents any opportunity to complain about their weaknesses and on the other hand, they would not need to hear their parents complaining about their behaviors, or, in a broader sense, their life-styles. This is in fact a win-win situation.
To sum up,young people should not just talk blankly about living independently without considering the actual situations they are in. If they are not quite ready for it, they can live with their parents for a longer period of time in order to get ready for it, but once they are prepared for it, they should do it without hesitation-for their own good and also for their parents' good.
