托福写作常见失分点

在备考托福写作时，考生们应该更加关注了解考试容易出现失分的地方，这样在考试时才能避免出现失分太多的情况。接下来就一起了解托福写作常见失分点有哪些。

托福写作常见失分点

1.用词不当

学生们在新托福写作中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

• In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

——problems应改为questions

2.拼写错误

这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

• In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.

——judgement应改为judgment

3.乱用大词

First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn’t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：

1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能连用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4.表达中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.

句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。

5.表意重复

1)They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.

前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

2) The show is so compelling but attractive.

3)compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

托福写作常见失分原因

1.成分多余

• According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

2.词性混乱

• However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

3.时态错误

新托福写作一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。

• Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

托福作文容易扣分的地方

1.结构不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

3.段落过长，不分段主语与动词一致问题：She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不一致。

4.句子别扭：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。

5.不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整理式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。

6.关联词语重复：Since I want to go to a good school， therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。